Margret Mead
Essay
In some cases Mead’s argument is
true people don’t always celebrate famous people that are smart some other
people celebrate someone that is special for them. But nowadays people do
celebrate the people that are successful in life, when the people celebrating
the people that are being successful in life the y should celebrate the people
that are around them and special to them. I think people do admire people that
succeed in life and not the people that are close to them. But in some cases
some people do care and celebrate the people that are around them.
Many people now a days admire
famous people. People follow and think that a person the is famous is their
hero just because they are on T.V., they sing, dance, or act. In my opinion,
people shouldn’t pay as much attention to a famous person. I think they can
like the famous person and think they are good at what they do but they shouldn’t
praise the person because the famous person is not a god they have done
something wrong because no one is perfect. This shows that people admire and
celebrate people they don’t really know. In my perspective people should admire
themselves or the people that are around them and that are important to them.
In many schools teachers or staff
tend to celebrate kids that are smart and not celebrate the kids that try their
best. In schools there are kids that are smart and succeed in life but there
are also kids that try their best but does not accomplish many things. Adults
admire kids that get good grades and awards, which makes the other kids feel
like they will not accomplish anything. In some cases the teachers tend to
bring the other students down by telling them that that they will not
accomplish anything.
I actual agree with what you say but you can go even more into detail about some of the topics in the essay
ReplyDeleteGood work and excellent vocabulary. this was really good.
ReplyDeletei totally agree with you in your argument with people raising their kids to celebrate people who are more famous. We all should admire each other for our gifts. This is a really good essay.
ReplyDeletenice essay. i agree with you with your essay. Nice vocabulary and the essay is long
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ReplyDeleteThat's the one thing that I question is what is an American, what makes it classified as different.
ReplyDeleteI actually agree with what you say and the argument you have about people and how they raise their children. Again nice job and good choice of words!
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